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"Lonely Girl"
  by musiq=rell


Lonely girl u sit here all alone no family no friends, just tears.
Lonely girl don’t be afraid, living in a world of fear.
U see your dreams through someone else’s eyes.
Little girl I feel ur tears even though I have not cried.
It seems as though you want to die because the life u live is now a lie.
You shoot crack up ur wrist trying to reach a new high.
U hide ya rocks in ya socks to keep them from wandering eye.
But u don’t see that I’m playin a game of: “I Spy”.
And I Spy a girl who had the whole world,
But now is just lookin for sum new dick so she can turn a quick flip.
A girl who’s tryin 2 make her clit wet quick b4 homie turns around a says:
Fuck this shit, u ain’t quick nd I’m stiff so he leaves to find a new girl.
A new girl who has little dreams in a big world who’s ready and willin,
To give him sexual healin, ready to make them panties drop and suck cock,
She’ll ride him like a Slip N’ Slide letting him enjoy the ride.
And it leaves you high and dry hungry and deprived.
Without yo crack babygirl you start to itch.
People walk by holdin their nose bcuz u smell like piss.
You look at ur wrists and wonder how did I end up like this.
Wanting to fall into a well that will lead you into the depths of hell.
Thinking that’s the l-u-v you need to replace yo fam-ily.
Looking at your wrists I see puss that oozes out from cuts and think wtf.
I c a girl who had the world in her hands, but now doesn’t even have a plan.
A girl who had a beautiful smile, but now has breath that reeks of bile.
A girl whose body was tight and new, but is looking like she got the flu.
Shorty you used to reach for the stars now you given niggas head in cars
You were one of a kind, simply divine, top of the line, it should be a crime.
Shawty was a ten, now you a negative two.
Lonely Girl I know who you are, the question is Do you know you?
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2008 (02:15 PM)
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  NativeLady
10/13/09 (08:46 PM) 
its just a shame dat there are alot of women in the world like this. gurls dat are falling short of their true potential. good write hun ~TIFF~

  Chinazy
09/18/09 (06:47 PM) 
wowwww phenomenal poem.

  Shanta`
03/04/09 (09:26 PM) 
WOW you really put it down ..! Im am blown away ...this was a wonderul piece and it was beautiful ...really could touch young ladies ...good job ...NICE FLOWING IT WAS ALL INCREDIBLE!

  xLiLmama
12/05/08 (10:26 AM) 
awe that is very good..1o stars

  MizzJess09
11/21/08 (06:45 PM) 
nice write. 10 stars hun.

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