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"Long Ago"
  by Gifted Pen


Gray skies seem to represent the mood of our relationship,
every relationship I've ever had for that matter
A spark of interest at first,
a pillar of smokey disappointment from then on
Smokey for the lack of clarity
Smokey for the way it made me choak
And smokey for the way it blinded me
And yet I still believe in love even though I've never exprienced it
But not in ill-fated love starcrossed and hopeless to succeed
I believe
in a love that minds can't wrap around at this time
Love from long ago
before tainted desires curbed the original expression of love

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (02:12 AM)
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  blackgirl930
11/21/08 (01:32 PM) 
u should try love its a gift that teaches and the good thing about it is theres all types

  RedLoveSong
11/19/08 (07:07 PM) 
Love the honesty. The only true and unconditional love I've experienced is from God, but since we are part of Him, I'll always believe we're capable to love like he does. Great piece.

  Heathy
11/19/08 (04:39 PM) 
u say u never experianced love wel goodthings come those who wait ive been waiting for a minute lol but i know ill be blessed soon nice write boo 10

  Xieliena
11/19/08 (03:32 PM) 
Believing in love and never experiencing it...I know how that feels...This is amazing..your work is just awesome...I love how you write...you should really keep it up

  ♀. Pro L...
11/19/08 (10:24 AM) 
yet I still believe in love even though I've never exprienced it But not in ill-fated love starcrossed and hopeless to succeed I believe in a love that minds can't wrap around at this time Love from long ago before tainted desires curbed the original expression of love - those lines fucking held this whole piece up for me... how wonderful it is to believe in something one has never experienced yet still hopeful of its existence.... who''s your favorite groupie GP? I ammmmmmmmmmm!

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