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"Looking For Love In All The Wrong Places"
  by stayfocus3d
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ' LOST by baby girl oo7


Looking For Love - Pretty Willie

Looking for love in all the wrong places
Looking for love but found no traces
Face it, the path you taking is outrageous
No way its gonna find you without patience
So Slow
D
O
W
N
Don't Oblige Wild Niggaz
Dat Only Wanna Nut
That's how you find your affection???
Then girl you outta touch
Like you only have four senses
But really down to three
Some niggaz take advantage
But you don't seem to see
Let me enlighten you, Give sight to you
Reach out and touch your soul
Just take your time, Just wait it's fine
True love you will behold

As well as your dignity
You diggin me???

And you don't even have to be a "hoe" for that
Just shovel all the shyt dudes say and throw it back
Wait for a real man, don't mess with every boy you meet
Look inside, and in time you'll find the joy you seek
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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2008 (04:59 AM)
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  Smart + Athlet...
01/07/09 (04:52 PM) 
i love dis poem and da song... ten stars

  da' hottest 10
12/22/08 (02:58 AM) 
good advice that was a nice write. thanks 4 takin some time out to say what no one else wants to say

  Cakez
10/19/08 (08:18 PM) 
oops, i meant to say the last stanza...

  Cakez
10/19/08 (08:18 PM) 
Ok, the last verse for me was perfection. But this poem overall was very inspirational. Women and especially young women really need to hear/read this.. I think I'm officially a fan of your work! Should I subscribe? Hmm, I think I will.

  ● í T...
10/18/08 (10:44 PM) 
aww dis iz so cute

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