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"Looking for Love in all the Wrong Places (LD Challenge)"
  by Group: Lyrical Divas
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Looking for love in all the wrong places by BxGrL




She find herself...
looking for love in All in the wrong Places

She find herself...Shutting down
Cause she cant find her way
She opens her heart
To Mr. Wrong
Letting him in
When he doesnt deserve her time

She find herself...Lonely and alone
When all she wants is a man to call her own
One that can connect with her
....mind
Body ....
...and soul
Become one with her in every way
Make her feel forever whole

She find herself....closing her heart
Afraid to let anyone in
Cause everytime a man
Comes into her life
And into her bed
He ends up taking more than he gives

Leaving the scene
As if they committed a robbery
Cause while they walk out of her life
They steal a piece of her heart
And the scene of their passion
Poured all over her bed
Reminding her each and everyday
Of the things that transpired

She finds herself....forgeting what love is
Cause while she finds love in all the wrong places
And loses herself in its place
She only needs to try at it one more time
And find love with Mr. Right....

BxGrl2009


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Date Submitted: Feb 16, 2009 (02:53 PM)
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  dontnohow
03/09/09 (11:26 AM) 
u dont look 4 love... it just cums 2 you... 10+ nice poem

  WIZ
02/18/09 (09:56 AM) 
gonna take some gems away from this write! AWLSOME! FAV! SMILES!

  Ordained2Chang...
02/17/09 (12:22 PM) 
We've all been in this place before... the great thing about this scenario is that the weakness can be identified

  Untouched_Soul
02/16/09 (08:29 PM) 
well we are all victims of this and you painted the picture just as it is usually seen

  angeleyes1
02/16/09 (08:18 PM) 
very beautifully written diva love this one so damn true keep them flowing much love

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