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"Looking n the Mirror"
  by JazzySoul


Me: is this where i really wana be?

Mind: yes.

Me: then why are His arms still callin me

Mind: it was juz a crush, where ur at is best

Me: wat say u, Heart?

Heart: dont ask me, im torn in two parts

Mind: nevamind wat she has to say, where ur at is where youll stay, give it sum time..itll be fine

Me: maybe ur rite..i mean after all it aint how u start da race

Heart: then how cum wen u close ur eyes wat u see isnt his face? how cum its not his kiss dat make me pace

Mind: true..i do find my thoughts less on him but wonderin in other places

Me: only because i have more issues fillin up those empty spaces

Mind: let be more specific..from him to the other, reminiscing

Heart: feelings have changed, from wat im sensing

Me: but wat if hes not the one like I presume

Mind: just wait it out, youll know soon

Heart: all I kno is that he isn’t the one who makes me swoon

Mind: you lie, he still does, but ill admit its like every blue moon

Me: its not that I no longer care..

Heart: but he doesn’t stare the way da other stares

Me: but wat if hes lyin and its all fake

Mind: you also question da other too for heaven’s sake

Heart: but think about wat u have at stake

Mind: dnt listen to heart, u kno how she goes blind

Heart: well she cant trust u, ur over analyzing all the time

Me: I cant decide to who to listen too

Mind: look a dis way, eitha way u choose-

Me: eitha way im gona loose…
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Date Submitted: Feb 22, 2008 (03:02 AM)
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  Luck-E
08/28/08 (09:11 PM) 
creative piece... love the concept... i think u need help.. j/p... but great write...

  Dante'
03/11/08 (09:59 AM) 
I love the way you intertwined yourself with fighting against your mind. I honestly have tried to do a poem like this, but it never came out. it's genious the way you did it. simple, yet not. This is my favorite you've done so far

  Soul Searcher
02/26/08 (12:12 AM) 
I felt the struggle in this one the wanting to be happy the need to be happy i told you u had it in you great write :)

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