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"Loosen Up a Bit!"
  by Shadowed Thoughts
  - This Poem is a response to the poem "Get a grip" by WrItN4aPurpse


What once was held tightly has loosened in grip
For your absence has taught me to chill out a lil bit

See, when we first got together I was all about me
A characteristic you loved so passionately
And somehow I’ve lost that and have become overwhelmed
By these feelings
Feelings of love yet fear of losing you when you are gone
Which have caused me to hold on rather tightly

But reality has reminded me
That what is meant will always be
So I should not hold on so tightly, there is no need
For if you are for me and I’m for you then there is nothing
Anyone can do
To take either away
And so I’ve pulled away
And loosened my grip
But it’s not because my feelings have decreased
It is because my mind and heart feel secure with you
And I’ve finally gotten some peace.
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2008 (11:54 AM)
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  **HOLLA**
11/09/08 (05:36 PM) 
Yeah well... I have the choke hold of death on a motherfucker because that's what they arev MEN!!! Loosen up the rope and they'll hang themselves so I'd rather not personally, but this was very nice

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/05/08 (10:18 AM) 
I LOVE the way you closed this!!

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
11/03/08 (01:44 AM) 
almost like if love something let it go and if it comes back the feelings were mutual...love how you expressed being secure with the person you love...definite step toward a lot of happiness

  Syndel
10/30/08 (05:24 AM) 
wonderful response this def should have awaken the question in his mind and given him reason to drop the guard and just enjoy the journey

  ASympl3Diamond
10/30/08 (03:43 AM) 
"t is because my mind and heart feel secure with you"--im kinda dealin with such at this moment..this time around i guess im going into it with no expectations cuss if its meant to be everything will fall into place like it has thus far

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