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"Lord, Make ME An Angel"
  by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem An Angel Would Pray by ShaniM




As we roam, earth-bound
Seeking and searching
A mate heaven-found
First, we must be shaped and molded
Before sinking into welcoming arms, unfolded

For, perhaps, we are not yet "prepared" for our "opportunity"
To receive God's blessing of a life-long, covenanted unity
But as we pray for God to send us that which we yearn
Perhaps, we still have growing to do and lessons to learn

So, until we are "prepared" for His "opportunity"
We are not, meanwhile, granted personal immunity
From all within us that must be extracted and subtracted
So that we, then, are more glorious and more deeply attracted
To and by the he or she
That be
Our mates sent.....divinely

Respectively

So, perhaps instead of praying for an angel, heaven-sent
We should pray that God "prepare" us to receive its descent
And that He make in US an "angel," matched in perfect accent....
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Date Submitted: Jan 10, 2009 (09:02 AM)
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  Shani. Medicin...
01/14/09 (11:21 PM) 
I have read this poem @least 3x's. i have on all 3 occasions attempted to make a response and I keep having to leave the computer so i will hopefully do so again. u sum it up so well by saying "divinely sent".

  THE LISA
01/13/09 (12:29 PM) 
Words of wisdom and to live by....I understand clearly and completely agree....Lord, it's me, that is standing in the need of prayer....Thank you!

  BSavvy
01/12/09 (11:39 PM) 
True wisdom and sound advice you are speaking nothing but pure truth.... Loved how you laid this out Snug....

  BoySoDef
01/12/09 (09:47 PM) 
WOW....YO I ENJOYED THE PASSION AND STRENGTH IN THIS PIECE...i ALSO SEEN THE HUMBLENESS.....NICELY CAPTURED....

  after vision
01/12/09 (10:01 AM) 
putting money in the tray -- instead of thumping the bottom to rattle the change -- nice truth

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