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"Losing Love"
  by thicke


The feeling so melancholy
But its not your fault
Girls desire you
Your swagger so potent
They adore you
But as I stay in background
Not making a sound or peep as I weep
I wonder if you notice me
Do you see me for me

Do I peak your interest like she does
Do I light fire in your eyes
Or am I stuck in the friend role
Someone you will never hold
My advice to be borrowed and sold

You use me like Im dumb and blind
Only when you're in a bind
Should I continue to let this happen
Is your friendship worth my suffering
Are you that important to me

Should I love you more than I love myself
This is what I have to answer
Because keeping your love is hurting me
But losing love might hurt even more
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Date Submitted: Sep 28, 2008 (10:32 AM)
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  Daniel William...
12/20/08 (10:05 AM) 
I love the poem. It is defintley written with expression. Good job. 10 stars. Daniel

  Vocab Vixen ak...
10/02/08 (02:56 PM) 
very well written.. and i have deffently been there.. two choices with in which both will hurt us... i liked this.. well written.. great flow.. and felt the emotion

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