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"Lost"
  by Star55



See the look on your face
Don’t touch me
Hear the way you talk behind my back
Why did you do it?
You think I don’t know
I don’t understand
Used to think you were right
How wrong could I be?
Shame-filled eyes stare
It wasn’t my fault
Your callous laugh pierces my heart
We hate you
You don’t care about me
You never have
What went wrong?
I need to know
Plead your case
I like you
Scream in my ear
I hate you
Did no wrong
How could you do this?
Feel completely lost inside
I still look up to you
Utterly depressed I can’t go on
You’re the only one that understands me
Pressure built so high I might explode
Don’t leave it up to me
Rip my heart out with your bare hands
Leave me to die

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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2008 (07:00 AM)
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  WIZ
11/06/08 (07:24 AM) 
I ALWAYS JUST TRIED MY BEST TO STAY AWAY FROM THESE KIND OF SITUATIONS ,ITS HARD EVEN WHEN WE THINK THEY ARE OUR FRIENDS. BUT I ALWAYS DREAMED THAT BETTER DAYS WERE ON THERE WAY. YOU SEE, MY OWN FAMILY WON'T EVEN TALK WITH ME, AND TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH, I FEEL SO MUCH AT EASE NOW, CUZ, THEY WERE THE TROUBLE MAKERS, ALWAYS BLAMING ME. STAY BLESSED! WAY TO GET THOSE EMOTIONS OUT.

  BIG CHIEF
09/01/08 (06:57 PM) 
WOW ..yo i feel your emotions in this piece..i can relate in so many ways with this write....i've been in that situation few times...great write

  Baby Piglet
08/12/08 (09:57 PM) 
i loved it i'm gonna go with a 10

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