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"Lost His Lyrics...In Her."
  by SlimCutta


Heartless (Unmastered) - Kanye West
The lost words..
Slipped through the very cracks..
That he tried to fill up quick-cement..
Verbs...down the left side..
And the nouns disengaged themselves to outward right..
Pen losing ink at such a fast pace..
Drip....
Drop....
Globs...

Lines and stanzas unperfected....
No one understanding his lost of words..
A sickness was the prognosis..
But the pills were suppose to suppress the lost of words..
All of a sudden the alphabet fell out ...
A's...
B's..
Then...T through then end..
All gone...
Standing...with a lost of expression..
With the lost of words..

And she stood...
A smile..that could brighten a hurricane's skies..
Yet he stood still..wondering...
How could she take the very words out of his mouth..
Knowing his mind...
Breaking the coded DNA simplex...
Recoding the words into a memoir..
Telling her friends..
All of the family ..saying "You wont find anyone better than her"

The word "Talk"...dissipates..
"Conversation"...blindly disappears..
"Words" ...become inevitably invisible..
And "Us"...start to fade slowly...from a deep black..
To a light faded gray...

Fighting to grab each word..
Leading each syllable to its end...
So he could reach and extend the way of communication..
So that his lyrics could touch her...
Soothe her...and rectify the situation...
Under a blanket of words...
"Lost"...
"Cold"..
"Confused"...
"Heartless?"...
Knowing only her warmth..
Of secret warms..
And coded messages only known to her..and i..

Gradually finding the words in the cracks of her..
Beginning to take form...
Reaching down for...."Help"
And he comes up with "Love"
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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2008 (02:19 PM)
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  WalkingButterf...
12/19/08 (10:13 PM) 
Wow...this chic had you twisted. Must of been a bad girl. Your words grabbed me and wouldn't let go.

  Ms. Smith
12/09/08 (08:55 AM) 
wow...leavin me speechless

  B.Reaves
11/08/08 (07:44 PM) 
i guess i just to agree with what everyone has already said. this piece is beautiful. u had me hooked from beginning to end...excellent write

  Chinazy
11/08/08 (06:51 PM) 
i love this poem.

  Elle D.
11/08/08 (06:50 PM) 
This is probably one of the most beautiful things i've ever read....

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