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"lost in thought"
  by B3yond R3d3mption


sittn on the curb stressed..puffin on a black n mild
tryna wife baby momz so I wnt hava bastard child
don't wanna b da daddy who gotta drive 100miles
jus to see his lil girl n miss 1million of her smiles
don't wanna have 2 fight 4 custody..child support n trials
wanna be there on her wedding day walkn her down the isle

don't wanna lose them both seems the outcomes evident
I wanna see her get gud grades n be intelligent
I wanna see her grow up beautiful and elegant
wanna reside with her till she's grown in a residence

in every struggle there's a moral and a lesson
but even when I find it the pain won't lessen
I finally found something to end my depression
inflation of feelings turned back into recession

I ask myself how do I know I love them both
cuz im sitting wit this black n mild n I don't even smoke
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (02:27 AM)
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  TheInfamousBab...
10/11/08 (06:54 PM) 
I agree with mzApril on this one. ut other than the obvious... this piece was touching... "wanna be there on her wedding day walkin her down the isle..." this was so sweet... Still lovin ur work. 10

  mz_April
10/11/08 (06:28 AM) 
YOU SHOULD MARRY FOR LOVE SWEETY. CAUSE IF ITS JUST FOR THE CHILD IT MIGHT NOT WORK OUT. KEEP YA HEAD UP

  DOMINICANPOET
10/09/08 (02:32 AM) 
tryna wife baby momz so I wnt hava bastard child <<<---shouldnt be tryin to wife someone because of a baby thats not a good thing.....but this piece is madd deep ten from me just maybe need to rethink that...

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