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"LOST LIL GIRL"
  by loyaltyb6


THAT DARK PLACE
IS INSIDE OF ME
AND ITS GROWING BIGGER AND BIGGER
NO WAY TO BE SET FREE

THE ANGER THE RAGE
THE OUT RIGHT DISGUST
STABBED IN THE BACK AND MY RIGHT HAND GONE
NO ROOM LEFT FOR TRUST

TEARS PAIN AND SORROW
FILL ME WHEN I AM ALONE
HE'S GONE...THEY KILLED HIM
NOW HOME WILL NEVER BE HOME

LOST IN THE SHADOWS
VERY LITTLE LIGHT
I CAN'T FIND MY WAY
CAN'T GET MY MIND RIGHT

A LONELY LIL GIRL
IS WHAT I FEEL LIKE NOW
I WANT TO BE THE OLD ME
BUT THERE IS NO WAY NO HOW

WHEN THE BULLETS PENETRATED HIS SKULL
MY SOUL DIED AS WELL
I'M STUCK IN THIS DAZE
LIVIN IN PURE HELL

I WANT MT BROOOOOTHER
AND THERE IS NOTHING I CAN DO
ITS BEEN 3 YEARS NOW
AND I CAN'T ACCEPT IT THOUGH ITS TRUE

WHAT CAN ANY ONE DO
FOR THE LOST LIL GIRL
WHO IS DEAD INSIDE WITHOUT HER ONLY BROTHER
HER ONLY REAL FRIEND IN THE WORLD
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2008 (09:55 PM)
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  The Mad Poet
03/05/08 (02:11 PM) 
Damn this is a powerful, deep, intense, and heartfelt piece!! I can definitely feel you on this one here boo!! It's tough losing someone u love so much especially when he's all u know!! Stay strong and keep writing it allows you to release some of the pain that's buried inside your soul!! *muahs* Much Love Boo

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