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"lost love"
  by Docc


just to point thangs out i cant sing i kno i cant sing but i felt lyk singing this doesnt rhyme but it makes rhyme to me nd this is just how i am so here it is

if i was your man i would make sure u was happy, even when your sad, even if i was mad i would hold u and tell you erethang was going to b aight. if i was your man, i would take you anywhere you want to go, if u was 3 hours away i would get there in a hour take u to the beach and play with the sand. i would take u to the park have u on top of the car so we could stare at the stars. call u ereday just to hear your voice never take nothing fo granite, if i were your man i would never cheat gurls might talk bout me but i would stay every hopur with u, i would turn off boxing in the middle of the night see what was wrong with you and just listin. if i was your man i would love tha best way a gangsta can nevamind i will love u with my whole heart. because i kno how it feels when u lose the one u love. i will put u first in my life talk to you like ur my wyfe. i would hold ur hand even if theres nobody around. i will tell you that your beutiful even if ur wearing tall tees and baggy sweat pance. but im not ur man and youll neva kno these thangs you will neva see that all i want fo you is to b happy best and all taht you are to this i guess i gotta say goodbye to my perfect angel, but just remember if i was your man
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (07:29 PM)
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Date: 11/23/08 (03:18 PM)
Author: tamara843chucktown
Poem Title: If I Was Your Girl/ ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  tamara843chuck...
11/22/08 (09:52 PM) 
awwh this is sooo beautiful it made me teary eyed...im lovin dis poem ima give you 10 starz and put dis as mi favorites

  kemistry
11/21/08 (01:47 PM) 
wow kidd good write

  Cutie So Tyi
11/20/08 (12:05 PM) 
WHAT DID I TELL YOU LOLZ DAM THAT WAS HOTT EBEN THOUGH I KNO YOU CANT SING I WOULD LOVE TO HRAR THIS PEACE SOO SWEEET HUNN!!!!!! GREAT JOB 10 starzz (shawdie lucky she got u)

  Shaboogie
11/20/08 (10:50 AM) 
ok aside form the phonetic spelling the sentiment expressed here was doep and not all poetry has to rhyme. if u cleaned it up a bit with the spelling and broke it down into stanzas i would love to see how it really flows. sorry phonetic spellign doesn't do it for me but because this was an honestly written piece obviously penned while you were felling some type of way imma give ya 8 stars poet keep writing.

  Candice STone
11/20/08 (10:44 AM) 
CAN I GET A MAN LIKE THAT PLEASE

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