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"Lost"
  by .Jaded Noble.


lost in a trance like state
my mind wanders aimlessly
through morbid nexeuses
searching for clarity to the troubles
that ail me.

wholeheartedly..
I plead for guidance.....
hoping that light
may be shed upon
my journey into the unknown.

my heart racing
at the speed of sound,
I envision eerie hallucinations
floating about..
scaring the living hell out me.

I....
can not help
but to quiver in fright,
that I..
the epitome of immaculate...

may cower before untold horrors.
The thought sickens me....
stratching at my mind
on end like jungle cats on the prowl
wondering will you...

save me?


.jaded noble. ©2008
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (12:50 AM)
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  big josh
10/08/09 (12:56 PM) 
damn hommie this was crazy. hot shit

  goldenshine200...
03/12/09 (04:24 PM) 
Nice write here. I like how this piece is simple yet packs some very powerful and subtle meanings in one piece. You think you describe something vividly here that we all experience in life.... Write On. Thanks for commenting on You Fool Me... 10z

  Maxine... of t...
03/12/09 (03:55 PM) 
Very introspective an eloquently written..bravo!

  DJ DOE GETTER
03/12/09 (03:47 PM) 
I will save you!!! I love this ink! This is one of those soul pieces and I have to say you found me with this one. "lost in trance like state my mind wanders aimlessly through morbid nexeuses searching for clarity to the troubles that ail me" Please know this was me for the last five months or so. This was a great read for me!

  me-me
12/16/08 (12:12 AM) 
damn dude you blazed this one great write 10 stars

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