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"lost one"
  by ♫ ej.brklyn.bred.





prolonged the surly so longs, in hopes that we could be
mo' potent than the rest, love stronger than herbal tea
&
now
reek rummages through nostrils, absent potpourri
expiration date approaching the adhesion of I and she
it went bad, spoiled rotten, ties securely knotted...
forgotten,
loosened, so the goose can run free from the
deathly noose of plucked melodies,
singing "my god MY GOD, loves suttn so sweet"
when its actually suttn sour, worsening horrendously by the hour

man can only admit so many blows before he snaps back
bothersome subtle hints, constantly screaming our loves
offff track, off track, its daring to depart way off track
with no hope of correctly recalling its crooked way back.
display your affections for all those to see
that shietttt,
you only care for 3 things
excluding me
well my friend,
I
ah-I
i-ah
take heed.

on april 12th my chords bleed
you lost one.

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Date Submitted: Apr 12, 2008 (11:16 AM)
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  Arcane
04/21/08 (09:46 AM) 
Really feeling the emotions you have shown in this write.. Defintely relating to the pain you have expressed..

  Pip
04/14/08 (04:40 PM) 
wow nice write. I really can relate to this. Your pain really shows through in this one i feel you all the way. Keep your head up tho 10 starz

  ۞ F1 Wes...
04/14/08 (12:16 PM) 
You have a wonderful way with words...and when you used them wisely, the world will become your oyster...or your pearl...depending on God's mood I guess

  --->QUEENPIN O...
04/13/08 (03:22 AM) 
WELL THIS SADDENS ME....BUT I DO LOVE THE BACKGROND...LOL...FIGHT 4 IT IF U BELIEVE IN IT...IF NOT....WELL THEN I GUESS THIS WILL BE IT...

  xxpliciit
04/12/08 (10:31 PM) 
Don't let her bring you down Eryk. I am here when you want to talk.

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