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"Lost Pen..."
  by A~BENEVOLENT~QUEEN


Feelings of emptiness rise
Floating like a ballon with no path
Welcomed unto the vastness of blue skies

I dismiss that I could actually be feeling nothing
For the paper that lies before me
I need to pen something...

I could just pen some quick shit
A haiku or some fictional shit, but
That would be just some bullshit
I could pen some love joint
But Im not in love wit anyone
So what's the point
To scribe just to say that I added another poem to my many scribes
A poem without feeling is just empty words... lies
I could pen some political shit
But I'd just be jumping on the bandwagon of what everyone else has already spit
OBAMA IS PRESIDENT!!!!
I'll let the exclamation marks speaks for themselves on my sentiments

I guess
That my pen is lost...
Rhetorical affirmation at best
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2008 (05:36 PM)
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  Certifiediva
11/11/08 (06:43 PM) 
I have to say that this is the most honest poem i've ever read. It's sad to say that someone with nothin to say had the most realest thing to say. Thanks for keepin it real mama

  ~Unpredictable...
11/11/08 (02:38 AM) 
But I'd just be jumping on the bandwagon of what everyone else has already spit OBAMA IS PRESIDENT!!!! <-----and they wonder why I aint jump on it and write a piece....I feel you on sooo many levels and I know what it feels like..mines bee on vacation for about 3 months...

  Untouched_Soul
11/07/08 (10:27 PM) 
interesting way of putting what i assume is writer's block....

  **HOLLA**
11/07/08 (09:33 PM) 
**SIGHS**, Girl, first of all is soooooooo nice to see you... second I've been here many of times and wind up doing what you just did, writing a beautiful poem about not having anything to write about... THERE, it's done!!! LOL

  *Tha Scorpion*
11/07/08 (05:54 PM) 
I think babe, sometimes we all feel like this. One thing is for certain. the breakthru for you will come, sooner or later, it always does.

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