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"Lost Without You"
  by Shadowed Thoughts


As much as I try to fight you
somehow life continues
to pull me to you
like the force of gravity,
I can..
-not-
escape you

life moves on around me
and as I try to keep the pace
I continue to...
fall///back
because I keep
looking back for you
subconsciously
calling out to you
and I must confess
I'm lost without you
my world is not whole
without you
I feel like the deepest part of me
is missing without you
and nothing I do
has been enough to make me forget you

I'm trying so hard to forget you
but God help me
I just can't see my life without you.



Take A Bow (Instrumental) - Rihanna

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Date Submitted: Nov 28, 2008 (01:26 AM)
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  WrItN4aPurpse
12/03/08 (08:43 PM) 
I love the way this ended.. I actually have an interesting question about this piece hun... so get ahold of me before I forget haha!!

  RedLoveSong
12/01/08 (12:09 PM) 
Sounds magnetic....the pull of love is so strong....nicely written and a great image in the bg...

  BlessedOne
12/01/08 (02:20 AM) 
Lovely piece. You made me think on this one. Without thought I would have said my famous line...Walk Away. Walking away is doing whats best for you. Never the less, I realize that on rare occassions second time around really does work. I know a couple who were high school sweet hearts, had a baby and went their seperate ways. Fifteen years later they reconnected, got married and had another baby, and so far...happy ever after.

  Bestever
11/30/08 (10:39 AM) 
wow!!! some people are just that special huh? I like this cuz i can see u as u write it... sittin there with such deep thoughts:-)

  ShatteredSoul
11/28/08 (05:54 PM) 
jus like the lady in the picture everything every once in a while goes off lost... maye theres a reason you cant forget them maybe just maybe you need to fall back walk two steps back and then begin walking forward again. just maybe. again nicely done :) [ oh and this is my song!]

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