GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow biscuit's PREVIOUS POEM TO ladybugg's POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Love Ain't Fo Da Kid"
  by biscuit


Niggas so cold
My heart den froze
Solid as a rock
No beat to my song
I'm love gone
How do I breathe again?
No signals will send
To the brain
I'm blu
Naw dis ain't da flu
I've been diagnosed
With an "Complicated Love" overdose
No cure
Love ain't fo da kid fa sure




© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (08:49 AM)
search icon
Viewed: 41 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (85 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/03/08 (10:02 AM)
Author: B-Y
Poem Title: Love-pulmonary resus...

Page: 1 
 


comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  ButterflyDream
12/12/08 (09:05 PM) 
A write I can deeply relate too,I mean who hasnt felt like this at some point?great job.

  TWANGINU
12/12/08 (07:07 PM) 
i got you.this was very nice.THE IDEA WAS ALL THAT.KEEP DOING YOUR THING..MUCH LOVE...10STARS

  09krayzlegz09
12/11/08 (09:52 AM) 
loved tha flow...i liked it ala in all...ten ***

  DEBOMILLIONZ
12/11/08 (09:30 AM) 
nigga i told you stop reading my work now look at you flowing like a champ damn i shoulda blocked you cause your gonna take all my shine now lol i loved it

  ~`m3llob00`~
12/05/08 (03:17 PM) 
Luv Dis!! Nice Tell It Like It Is Ma'

Page(s): 1  2 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow biscuit's PREVIOUS POEM TO ladybugg's POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy