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"Love Captured"
  by angeleyes1


Love captured us,

Over the pain and lust,

Voting for our day,

Everlasting love to come our way,

Captured feels so right,

A candle flickering in the night,

Pretending this love does'nt exist,

Touching and loving me with a kiss,

Unleashing the fire in me,

Receiving the heat to set you free,

Everything I go through,

Done with others, cause I captured you.

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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (03:41 PM)
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  Untouched_Soul
12/25/08 (03:41 PM) 
this is the greatest love ! you described it perfectly

  ash_g
11/18/08 (08:46 PM) 
very good flow and...wow that'z all i can say this was real good though. -♥ ash

  African Queen
11/14/08 (01:01 AM) 
massive flow right here ma...im loving this acrostc pieces...10*s from moi!

  Lajhae
11/11/08 (09:46 PM) 
o i'm really in love with this write! it like u wrote it just for me and my current situation! wow this is officially my number 1 poem right now lol 10 starts

  leezymleezy
11/11/08 (02:01 PM) 
this is nice....I like how you actually made the acrostic rhyme..

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