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"Love flourishes.."
  by Bittersweetpoet


Love flourishes inside me......
Everything seems to be picture-perfect...immaculate.
Yet, something inside me prevents me from reaching my fullest potential.
I still find myself masking my emotions with smiles...
I'm cursed with a caring heart
I'm bruised....and I keep putting myself out there....
I refuse to conform to tricks and psychological mind games
I let you know how I feel...
So delicate...fragile...
yet love flourished inside me...
beyond heartbreaks...let downs...disappointments...
love still flourishes within me.
it's the strength of me....
yet wounds cannot heal easily....
words of comfort are easily said then done
expressions are like puzzle pieces that fall apart....
bruised...alone and afraid to let anyone else in....
I can't!
I won't........the hurt is unbearable....
so love me from afar...as i use tissues to wipe silent tears that i won't let you see
Love flourishes inside me.....but you all are stunting the growth...
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Date Submitted: Nov 13, 2008 (11:06 AM)
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  nakedra
11/24/08 (11:50 AM) 
your poem gets a 10

  Diemenz
11/13/08 (09:30 PM) 
this so pulled me in outstanding

  A..Po...ETic.....
11/13/08 (07:53 PM) 
I AGREE ONCE AGAIN EMOTION TAKES OVER...EPP DOING U MA...GOOD WRITE

  Mr. RTJ
11/13/08 (02:07 PM) 
rich with emotion. the catch 22 that is the carrying heart. to give out such love and risk being cut down by it or to hold it in and cut one's self off from a wonderful experience. very admirable to stick by one's principles and not fall prey to the tricks that have formed around love. this flowed very well and really pulls the deep relatable emotions from the readers. good stuff. and that last line was a killer ending.

  angeleyes1
11/13/08 (12:58 PM) 
very beautifully written and deep emotions pouring down the page keep flowing diva much love

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