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"LOVE HATE"
  by mscookie2u


STANDING UP ATTEMPTING TO RELEASE SOME OF THIS ANGER INSIDE OF ME,
I FORM THE WORDS INSIDE OF MY MOUTH TO SAY "PLEASE LEAVE."
AS YOU WALK TO THE DOOR MY HEART CANT TAKE ANYMORE, I CAN FEEL MY BLOOD RUSHING ALMOST MAKING ME EXPOSE MY TRUE EMOTIONS AND YELL OUT "PLEASE DONT GO!!"
THATS WHAT MY BODY IS SCREAMING, JUST BRUSH UP AGAINST ME AS YOU ARE LEAVING, JUST THIS ONE LAST TIME, I NEED IT!!
RIP MY CLOTHS OFF, ITS FINE THEY ARE MATERIAL OBJECTS,
THINGS THAT I CAN REPLACE UNLIKE THE LOVE FOR ME THAT YOU HAVE IF I ALLOW IT TO VANISH TODAY.
NO MORE SEEING YOUR HANDSOME FACE IN THE MORNING WHEN I AWAKE,
OR THE FACIAL EXPRESSIONS YOU MAKE WHEN YOU TAKE A BITE OUT OF MY FAMOUS " NATURE CAKE"
BUT WHO AM I FOOLING THIS RELATIONSHIP WE HAVE IS MORE OF A LOVE, HATE, AND I DESERVE BETTER BUT I CANT HELP IT I LOVE IT THIS WAY.
THE THINGS YOU DO TO MY BODY, DONT THINK IT CAN BE REPLACED,
CAN PICK ANY OTHER STICK OUT THE OCEAN BUT DONT THINK IT CAN "DIG" IN IT THE SAME WAY.
HOLD ME TIGHT FOR A MINUTE, ALL I NEED IS ONE MINUTE, WHO THE FUCK AM I KIDDING I NEED YOU ALL IN IT.
NOW, YES RIGHT NOW!! FORGET WHAT I STATED PREVIOUSLY, MAKE LOVE TO ME.
I CAN RESUME HATING YOU WHEN YOU LEAVE...
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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2008 (11:17 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/26/08 (09:03 AM)
Author: TWANGINU
Poem Title: LOVE ME MORE,HATE ME...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  StraY12
11/21/08 (06:21 PM) 
This was nice, I can feel the emotion in this, and I gotta agree with mikeb, that line was nice, the whole back n forth between what you want and what you need is a good way to portray love/hate, a 10 for this one, no doubt!

  mikeb30
10/25/08 (02:35 PM) 
damn...way 2 put ur reader in ur moment.."I CAN RESUME HATING YOU WHEN YOU LEAVE' ( u know thts wrong..lol) ...great write..

  Ryta
10/19/08 (03:21 PM) 
wooooooooooooow ma u did ya thang.I really liked it keep the pen moving a 100 a day.

  C-Jay21
10/19/08 (11:27 AM) 
very sensual write , I love the emotion you put into this.

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