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"Love Hater"
  by rhythmicsoul


Paces away is an infatuation
Two Hearts brought into a common situation
The arrow has struck and claimed its victims
The lovers play fight and giggle as I resent them

He pinches, she pokes and ignores all else
While cupid is off to congratulate himself
I sigh and I bare it as the display grows
Thinking to myself to hell they can both go

Am I Jealous? you may ask
No, although, cupid can kiss my ass
Im sitting right here with a dream beside me
While he works his magic on the buffoons behind me

When I find love it will be a victory all my own
To relish at my hard work as I sit on my thrown
Who will be beside me will be my choice
Since clearly cupid is deaf and can't hear my voice

Maybe he just ignores me
As much as I call on him you'd think he adores me
Maybe he's taking his time to find me someone greater
But I want mines right now so I can stop being a hater.
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Date Submitted: Apr 04, 2008 (09:35 PM)
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  RedLoveSong
02/10/09 (05:07 PM) 
Real talk sprinkled with some humor...very entertaining...

  Ms. Hollywood
04/18/08 (04:21 PM) 
haven't i felt this way before....time and time again... you all in my head....lord knows cupid has constantly looked over me and hit every one else who wasnt worthy of love..but on a lighter note...aint that some shit?

  piss a mofo of...
04/09/08 (07:54 PM) 
My Brotha!!! i see great minds think alike and soooooo we think alike...yea that lil bastard ..."when i find love it will be a victory all my own to rlish at my hard work as i sit on my thrown..."....that's whats up Bro i know that's real!!!!

  SloFade
04/04/08 (11:00 PM) 
DAAAAAAAAMN! LOL! I see why Syndel was laughing now...This is sooo slick. I thought I was the only one who looked at that lil' naked bastard as a trouble-maker....maybe that's why they make him a child...I don't trust him...

  Syndel
04/04/08 (10:10 PM) 
LMAO this was not only funny but dammit the truth he hates me also too many lines to capture so I will just favor to read when I am being a hater def felt this

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