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"love (hatreds poem)"
  by Luck-E


how can a sane man love....
if love is insanities gift
gods dream & lucifers wish
a souls illusionary taste of a semi-passionate kiss
the instant moment of....
a hearts rapid beat
as the mortal mind ingest deciet
leading to the silence of a heart being broken
creating an introvert of a prince who is already soft-spoken
furthur fillin his mind with hatred for the nubian queen
bringing forth nitemares of a once elated dream
so the eyes that once held passion brighter than a star in the nite
now cast looks that cut twice as deep as a surgical knife
and has the future king wanting to end his life
but didn't since he knows who he was born to be
a destiny that drove him after his humbling moment of clarity
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Date Submitted: Jul 09, 2008 (11:25 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/13/08 (10:52 PM)
Author: InfiniteInMe
Poem Title: Love (True?)

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comment icon  COMMENTS (33)
  misses fowetry
09/20/08 (10:21 PM) 
THAT WAS DEEP ......I LOVED THE WAY YOU USED LOVE AS A BLESSING AND CURSE DEFINETLEY A FAVE

  smooch
09/16/08 (01:09 PM) 
WOW THIS WAS DEEP LOVE IT REAL TALK YA GOT TALENT

  ButterflyDream
08/26/08 (01:40 AM) 
I simply loved this showed what sometimes happens after the fairytale.very good display of emtion

  SOUTHERN SEXY
07/21/08 (12:19 AM) 
Nice....very emotional. Defining, and very truthful words. Love is definitely deceitful at times......more often than not.

  Jamillah
07/21/08 (12:11 AM) 
such introspection... cynicism.. alot to think about.. a great question to ask.. i guess the answer is.. he just does...

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