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"Love HoneyCombed with Lies..."
  by TS


You grew attached to my soul
Adhered to the muscle tissue of my heart
United to the very ends of our beings...or so i thought
I crushed my opposing beliefs
Because the more i was in your mind
The more i felt at ease....
Like we were one
Tunneling down the same thoughts
And although at times i'd catch you thinking about the last
I wasnt insecure enough to believe that that is where you preferred to be
Because with me
With me you were introduced
To the only love that combines
The Mind, body and soul
And unless you havent figured out yet
We became adjoined at the very core
The moment our lips interlocked
And discussed the type of walls we'd construct
Because it became
Us against the world
Us against the dishonesty that was bound to destroy us...
And I remember a time when
Our eyelashes seemingly binded
Because for a moment it was only I
That reflected from your eyes
It was only you that i saw...
We were associated with love
By dictionaries, songs and poetry
But unfortunately
The grip we had on trust
Slipped between the fingers we interlaced
And shattered on the ground we thought could sustain us...
Now we stand on a crumbling platform
On a not so sturdy foundation
Because since the beginning
We plastered glue instead of concrete
We mounted wood chips instead of steal beams
And we placed a latch on the door to our love
Instead of fortifying a lock with voice activation...
Because the only possibilty of you leaving me
Should have been a verbally expressed
Detailed statement
As to why, when, and how the fuck all of which we worked so hard for
Could come to an end?


**HoneyCombed : to cause to be full of holes; pierce with many holes or cavities**
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Date Submitted: Jan 07, 2008 (12:17 PM)
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  Spit Ace
01/31/08 (11:42 PM) 
Well, I'm with the rest of the world on the title - just to get that out of the way lol. This was also a clincher: "Us against the world / Us against the dishonesty that was bound to destroy us... ", unfortunately vivid for me but a well done write hehe.

  XPERIENCE
01/15/08 (12:42 AM) 
first off i love the title... and damnit if i havent been there.. its funny how i feel like ur peeking in my journal...

  --->ROXIE<---
01/11/08 (08:57 PM) 
WOW....THIS WAS SO BITTER SWEET...BUT I KNOW THE FEELING ALL 2 WELL...FIGHTING SO HARD 4 SOMETHING...ONLY 2 MEET DEFEAT....UNFORTUNATE!...GREAT SCRIBE!

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
01/10/08 (05:31 PM) 
the conclusion is the ultimate inquiry so loudly asked with emotional authority.. this is something like a relationship it begins calmly with hope and bliss then its becomes intensified sensitive and questionable.. excellent metaphoric title.. Peace

  mariposa
01/10/08 (04:03 AM) 
first: the title. INGENIUS! wow, what a title... caught my attention rite off the jump mujer... and the monotone that you started this write with just built up with intensity and emotion... and the last to line, honestly, using the f-word in there just nailed the coffin shut... anger and venom heartache and sadness... all in those last two lines.... awesome write.

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