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"LOVE IN YOU"
  by J- ANIMAL


If bearing the way I feel for
you is committing a crime
Am I braking the law
Devoting myself to you
You are the hope my dreams are
build on
the reason for my happiness
your my everything and so much more
you the air i breathe
my fantasy world
I'd give my last breath just to see you smile
my true gardan sent in disgusie
as a child
I was always told brithday wishs come true
I wish to see an angel and god sent me you
I'd never like to see you hurt
cause our love is true
since your heart was broken
I gave mine to you
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Date Submitted: Apr 16, 2008 (02:49 AM)
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  Lil Mamma Rena
09/24/09 (11:41 PM) 
wow once again you stole my heart lol wish you were writing about me ....anyway like i said before you have a way with grqbbing me...your words is like yac for me just kidding im speaking of that henny neway keep writing about love i think you got it lol

  Sexy_&_Sassy
09/15/09 (12:24 AM) 
ii WiiSH 2 S33 AN ANG3L AND GOD S3NT M3 U! DAMN i WiSH SOM3BDY WOULD SAY SOM3 LiK3 DAT TO M3! DATS WAT U CALL R3AL LOV3! D33P SHiT i MUST SAY! i LOV3! NiC3 WRiT3 HUNN! 10 STARz...

  22sunflower
09/13/09 (09:46 PM) 
awww wow wish this was me 10starz

  Mz_Ndependent
09/13/09 (08:55 PM) 
Muy bien... Dis was beautiful..., Lucky girl who got your heart I c... :)

  KIWI BABE
09/07/09 (08:06 AM) 
you're pretty good :P

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