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"...*Love* Is An Emotion..."
  by *Miss Toya*
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Forgive Love by KSMOVE


L.ove doesn*t taint the mind
O.r corrupt the soul...love is an emotion...discredited and de-
V.alued for most of the holes...left in hearts...as a result...of unfavorable
E.vents, but *love*, is not to blame for the pain...the person who caused it is

I.t*s easy to blame love, I know cause I*ve done...it many times before...I*ve
S.worn it off, vowed never to fall again, I even padlocked, my hearts door

A.llowing no one in, and there was absolutely
N.othing, Cupid could do...He couldn*t touch me...Then he

E.nded up in front of me, I turned around, and he.arrow.dynamically fucked me
M.aking ME trust ME, with my
O.WN heart, love MYSELF first
T.hen he placed another dart....
I.n my core...love is an emotion...
O.ccurring mentally....and can be a beautiful thing, so
N.umb your insecurities, give *love* a chance, and see what happiness can bring
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Date Submitted: Oct 21, 2009 (10:16 AM)
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  DaddysGirl
10/27/09 (11:59 AM) 
you said sooo much here..a flawlessly executed acrostic w/ a beautifully inspiring message. i love the sentiment of this piece. well done, lady!

  santiago\\\\\\...
10/23/09 (05:18 PM) 
so true...but will we ever find a way to see this without asking?...i dont think so but you def. took the first step into showing the world...thanks again toya your talent is pricless...much like you smile...Santi\'

  (Floetic~One) ...
10/22/09 (11:01 PM) 
\"*love*, is not the blame for the pain...the person who caused it is\" so tru... you laid this out flawlessly... great presentation too

  lyric1985
10/22/09 (02:11 AM) 
loved this piece, chulita... xoxo mz. lyric

  Syndel
10/21/09 (06:31 PM) 
have to keep reaching you never know what needs to be found you correct its an emotion one I dont think I want to live without

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