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"Love is....."
  by Speechless


can somebody tell me this
does true love really exsist...is there such a bond of total commitment
the consistent kissin of lips and connection of hands...
i fail to understand the love cycle and its plans.
is there a such thing as one woman for one man.
as of today even the plan to prepare marriage is false
we all love and lost then love once more...
open to shut doors...hurts the core of our soul...
too much for one to hold yet we fall again.
put our all in as we witness it end...
no more kisses nor friends...
cant be happy no ma nor pappi just baby mama baby daddy
sadly love is fading towards the past as we head to future
nowadays its crucial...
it seems as if cheatin is how you play the game
and its plenty contenders that aim at unsuspectin individuals.
"hey lil mama whats yo name"
"you gotta nice frame" "can u be my main"
what a shame he just wanna hit...
and she just wanna stick out her hips...
and get it 'til she bite her lips...
kissin necks but really we kissin sin...
children born from love...not family
makin love...um not understandin...
but in all that life is demandin we need some kind of companion
for withstandin the damage cast upon us...
to be honest love is what it is....
but no lyin we confuse love with other shit...
love is dyin...
but its not dead
as its multiplyin with the science of kids slidin out vaginas
through sinning sex...but love is what we call it
some of us are just relationship alcoholics...
i know i am damn.

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Date Submitted: Mar 01, 2008 (01:03 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 03/01/08 (12:29 PM)
Author: j babi
Poem Title: what love really is....

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comment icon  COMMENTS (52)
  bootz
03/16/08 (08:59 PM) 
this is soo true. Everybody i know is a babymama....no one wants to even get married...i do. Good job big bro

  baby D
03/16/08 (02:44 PM) 
NICE I LIKE

  Lil Ma
03/15/08 (05:44 PM) 
wow this is deep right here and i love the picture. it makes me feel the intensity of this poem. 10 starz!!!

  Lush21
03/11/08 (01:27 PM) 
Damn damn damn. "Making love...um not understanding..." and "some of us are just relationship alcoholics"...these lines hit me to the core. Im loving this write as well. 10 stars most def. & a fave

  nikishab
03/09/08 (10:38 PM) 
Man, you speak some real sh**. I am also a relationship alcoholic. Actually I'm in recovery. Any way love this is also a fav

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