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"Love like Chocolate"
  by deja`vu


Baby you know I love you,
and I know you love me too,
and you show it in the cutest little ways,
Like when you brush my hair and whisper in my ear,
or when you gently leave me a kiss you hold my hand,
Every holiday you show your love for me even more,
for Christmas I got a stuffed animal,
on Fourth of July you told me that no sparkles from fireworks could outshine how beautiful I was,
But the holiday I remember the best was Valentines Day,

You called my house early in the mornin just to say I Love You,
in the afternoon you picked me up and took me to a beautiful restraunt,
once we finished our dinner and moved on to dessert,
they brought a specially made banana split just for us,
we finished and drove off to the park,
the moon was out and the water from the lake sparkled like your eyes,
you turned to me and gave me a kiss,
not just any kiss,
but a hershey's chocolate kiss.

(And that's why love reminds me of chocolate)
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Date Submitted: Dec 28, 2007 (10:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 01/05/08 (05:41 PM)
Author: Tab Tab
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Poem Title: CHOCOLATE KISS

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comment icon  COMMENTS (47)
  Pip
04/21/08 (04:29 PM) 
aww this is cute. I can really feel your love on this one. your very creative to compare the two!

  deepsoulbrutha...
04/21/08 (04:26 PM) 
lol thats funny i like the flow and it has a good vibe to it 2

  T Shyne
04/16/08 (06:00 PM) 
dis was nice..lol good write ma

  Songbird
04/16/08 (05:55 PM) 
my first kiss was with my first boyfriend in the 11th grade and i love this poem it speaks to me

  CynnaJynnx
02/08/08 (05:57 PM) 
Mmm! I like chocolate. My first kiss was the giant hershey kiss. It made my day.

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