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"L.O.V.E"
  by bumpy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Room for improvement (historical facts) by Blackdymend


Lose yourself. Let go of your inhibitions; drown yourself in someone elses troubles. Lead an endeavor that causes you to forget about yourself, and care for another persons well being.
Only you and me. Or, the start of a new thing. Our minds are kindred, we are now united as one...to protect and cherish each other for as long as this feeling lasts.
Violently unstable. Veering side to side, round and round this love thing is a rollercoaster that we can't control. Very confusing; we don't always feel it but we push past the pain to please.
Either way its a dream. Every view of love is tainted. Even if we think we have loved completely, we have not. Even thought this four letter word defines our emotions for another; the problem is that we don't know how to stay there.

Somebody PLEASE, tell me how we stay there.
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Date Submitted: Jan 21, 2008 (08:48 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/25/09 (07:35 PM)
Author: bigmo
Poem Title: From Famine To Feast

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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  big josh
06/09/09 (12:09 AM) 
i honestly wish I had the anwser because I ask myself the same question, this was a really good poem, nice write :)

  Pcutty
02/28/09 (06:49 PM) 
intresting i like 10starz

  poetri1st
02/27/09 (07:11 PM) 
when I find out I'll let you know : / ...that is one of that hardest things for ppl to maintain. Everyone's idea of love is so different...great scribe.

  Tha Ghetto Poe...
02/25/09 (03:45 PM) 
I cant even answer that question but this was good I could feel where you was comin from

  bigmo
02/24/09 (04:31 PM) 
nice twist on an acrostic. i LOVE the message. Keep doin yo thing!

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