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"love"
  by after vision


mind me not
as i prepare
a meal for your heart

what is love
love -- is a noun
a person place or thing

take notice
not
a house money or ring

love -- simply is
it takes no action
action
is often taken for it

so much is done
in the name of love

but if love is undefined
then what is love

love is not a destination
for destinations have finish lines

love -- don't move
we move to love

love -- is free
for love will set one free

love -- takes one
but is oh so much better with two

love -- never ask to be heard
love speaks without words

i know because love
befriended me


after vision
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2008 (08:38 AM)
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  harley quinn/a...
10/11/08 (06:56 PM) 
thanks for inspration

  WIZ
10/03/08 (08:40 AM) 
WOW! HTIS IS A FAV FOR ME! YOU PUT THIS OUT AMAZINGLY HEARTFELT! ROCK-ON!

  poetrys peace
10/01/08 (06:28 AM) 
I started to write apoem response.. this moved me so...... but I'll just comment this time :) ..."but if love is undefined... then what is love" ... thats deep because even though it IS undefined we stil managed to come up with countless words to its refine.....the part that left me speechless was "love is not a destination.. destinations have finish lines" .... WHOA!!!! and then you came with "dont move... we move to love" ...... that was just breathe taking.... your style and depth is really...
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  mz_April
09/29/08 (04:56 PM) 
great peice i love it keep ya pen hand strong 10*

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