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"LOVE MAKING."
  by Ladii Ca$h


I can't control it, its taken the best of me...
From deep down inside of my sorry soul
Feeling the tension from whats been killing me all day
I need a break, like the summertime
Something new always come around
It's winter, but this burning feeling i get from u makes me heated.
Heated as in good, never bad for u
I'd be lucky enough if I could make u my boo
We're friends..but tonight i wanna take it to that level
Not friends with benefits, but friends who want to be lovers
I can see in your eyes that u feel the exact same
By the way that u look as u say my name
Knowing me, i'm the shy type when it comes to these butterflies
Yesturday I was homegirl, but tonight i'm YOUR girl
Having thoughts of us---
Maybe this is too soon..is it just me or is it hot in this room?
Damn..there my excuses go off again
The concept of this night was hopefully get some
But here i am sitting here twiddling my thumbs
You get straight to the point that your feeling things
That with no other girl you did, especially a friend
I couldn't say the same..cuz i've been in love but had my heart broken every shape that u could imagine.
"I feel u..A girl like u deserve WAY better" as i sat thinking bout those 4 scary letters
I'm feelin this dude but the moment feels awkward
He leans in for a kiss as i accept him to give it like his name was myspace
He gently lays me on the bed as i could feel my heart beating louder than 50 drums in an african tribe.
I'm not a virgin..but i've never made love before
I hope this will be the first..to make me feel like a virgin once again
To feel so right but feeling wrong cuz its a friend
DAMNIT! Get that out of your head..if I say it one more time just shoot me dead
As he kisses me..he removes my shirt, as i'm feeling more comfort as i unbutton
my pants
He asks me am I ready as I moan out "Yes"
He's the first to ask this HAS to be the night of my dreams
We're both bare naked as we lay there like a beautiful piece of artwork being ready to be painted
I hear fireworks in my head as i feel excitment overcoming me
This feeling is wierd..but now it feels right
By the end, I'll say this would be the first i made love tonight.







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Date Submitted: Dec 22, 2007 (03:39 PM)
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  Wonny B
10/05/08 (04:55 PM) 
WOW DAT WAS TOO DEEP GIRL...NICE WRITE KEEP IT UP...I WAS FEELING THE WHOLE MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A VIRGIN ONCE AGAIN LINE

  cody123
06/21/08 (12:51 PM) 
love the video it was deeep keeep the goood work up and never give up how do you get you idea from you have got talent 10 stars from me and keeep the pen moving forever i like reading you poems 10 stars from me cody123

  TRU FLOW
06/13/08 (07:33 PM) 
Yo this hot... keep doin it....

  KiNg-Go0B3r
06/12/08 (05:11 PM) 
ooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this was deep as a biiiiih

  Unique Deja
05/18/08 (07:48 PM) 
OMG!!!....one word gurl...BEAUTIFUL!!!!!..this reminds me of how much in love i am w/ my best friend...like i be feelin juss like u described...i loved the word play...my favorite lines were.."I'm not a virgin...but i've never made love before"......"I hope this will be the first..to make me feel ike a virgin again"...kept me in tune gurl...10 strz!

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