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"Love Met Me Too..."
  by Untouched_Soul
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Love Met Me by Dawn


The fluidity of love has captured my soul.
And like a volatile oil it as polluted my breezy days.
Its stigma etched into my every pore.
I cling to it.
Allowing it to control me with its euphoria,
I am saved by the essence of its integrity.
Seeking its solitude, no more
As it is here in my arms, for the taking,
I cannot run from the soothing experience.
Nor can I avoid the reality of its existence.
Love...has captivated my soul and shown me immortality.
The waves of love have crashed upon the shore of my heart
Causing, even the sands in the hourglass of time, to be envious.
They whisper of deception and secretly hope for treachery.
I dismiss their apathy.
I pardon their naivety.
I devote myself to LOVE.
Freeing my soul...on the wings of its abeyance,
I am content.
The aroma, of it is so intoxicating.
So glorious
I do not know why I am so blessed
But I revel in it and hold it sacred.
Love met me at my door with arms wide open.
I am now complete.

untouchedsoul
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Date Submitted: Oct 31, 2008 (09:40 PM)
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  Ordained Misfi...
11/03/08 (03:13 PM) 
I must be the better admin... I subscribed to you months ago lol.. just kidding. Indeed... love completes

  foremanlin
11/01/08 (01:30 PM) 
great response, you have an exquisite way with words, you are so blessed, with a love like that how could you not be

  chocolaetreat
11/01/08 (11:48 AM) 
Damn.... Causing even the sands in the hourglass of time , to be envious!! I love this write ... nice response!

  Dawn
10/31/08 (10:16 PM) 
This was so beautiful..nice response..I am subscribing to your work.....nicely written..adding this to my favorites

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