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"love of my life"
  by revolt


beats broken up
to rhythms understood
looped and repeated nothings
cut and pasted
sampled sounds forming
the inner vibrations
and the genius
of what I'm in love with
since the first tune
in to your melodies
soothing sounds
on proving grounds
graphic imagery
of your stomping grounds
relate to many
escape goat sunken chin deep
you gave me
reached out arms
when i needed direction
your made in perfection
enduring many
black eyes
beat downs
and puppeteer strung
money marketed accounted
makeovers
extremed
embracing all the dreams
sold
told and wanted
all i wanted
was a class of you own
regardless of all your changes
tribulations
and rapes on your essence
you always seem to find your way home
you've grown so much
since last seen
i see your touches
on everything
traveled world wide
premiering in distant lands
battling the perversions
distortions
and pillaging
it was all out of your hands
the inevitable truths
you had to go through
never forgetting
your roots on culture
what made you
sink in to my heart and mind
because hip hop
your the love of my life
and more than a stae of mind.
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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (10:37 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/05/08 (10:18 PM)
Author: ♀. Pro Lyrical...
Poem Title: Sounds {of} Belief

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Sum-Thyng Like...
01/02/09 (05:20 PM) 
oooooooooooo this was a very magical write loved how u laid it out brav fukkin O

  Ms. Sincerious
12/03/08 (03:50 PM) 
"never forgetting your roots on culture what made you sink in to my heart and mind because hip hop your the love of my life and more than a stae of mind.".. this was dope.. I knew immediately what it was going to lead to.. but nevertheless the wordplay made the journey to the end dope as hell.

  KiNg-Go0B3r
12/02/08 (05:42 PM) 
daamn bruhh this was poeticaly ill fo real i digs it, keep that pen movin

  phire fly
12/02/08 (01:36 PM) 
that was excellent!!! bravo

  J@yBoogz••.•'¯...
12/02/08 (01:33 PM) 
Ayyyyoooo! Kid the play on words in this piece were so on point kid!!! "and the genius of what I'm in love with since the first tune in to your melodies soothing sounds on proving grounds graphic imagery of your stomping grounds relate to many escape goat sunken"<---Simply stated...DOPE AS HELL FAM!

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