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"*----+_LOVE OF SUBTRACTIONS_+----*"
  by lavish


IVE TRYED MANY TIMES
TO GO MY OWN WAY

BUT THE LOVE
I HAVE FOR YOU
IS HOLDING ME BACK
TO STAY

IVE TRYED PUTTING
THE MOMENTS IM IN FIRST

BUT THEY FADE AWAY
IN SECONDS
AND YET YOUR FIRST
AND IT HURTS

HOW IN THE WORLD
WILL I BEGIN ?
I THINK OF ARE LOVE
OVER AND OVER AGAIN

AND IT KILLS ME
TO KNOW WE NOW
ONLY STAND AS FRIENDS


QUESTIONS OF

WILL I EVER BREATH AGAIN ?

WILL THIS BROKEN HEART OF MINE MEND ?

WILL I EVER TAKE ANOTHER CHANCE TO LOVE AGAIN ?

FRUSTRATIONS OF

WILL THERE EVER BE SATISFACTION ?

NO BECAUSE LOVE IS KNOWN TO ADD UP
AND END WITH SUBTRACTIONS
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Date Submitted: Jun 26, 2008 (01:20 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/30/08 (11:17 PM)
Author: JoshuaDwayne
Poem Title: Subtractions

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comment icon  COMMENTS (51)
  thereelest
09/01/08 (10:27 PM) 
...add up, end with subtractions...superb. couldn't have said it better.

  LadiiTavia
08/21/08 (01:53 AM) 
loved it 10 stars

  chocolaetreat
08/15/08 (10:50 AM) 
Well Alright then... because love is known to add up and end with subtractions???! Love it!

  MR. BYRD
08/13/08 (02:24 PM) 
great write.....that's what love will do to you.....continue to push that pen....10 stars from b-y

  MizDuval
08/12/08 (12:13 PM) 
wow...yet another amazing write...u got sum mad skillz 4 real...and i can tell u were speaking with some true emotion right here...very nice... 10

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