Poem: Love Pt. II - by Truessence4u

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"Love Pt. II"
by Truessence4u

I won't kill you with my words,
I'll kill you with my verbs scream
to myself I don't deserve for my
will the day I lie, I lie to the
eyeglasses of the mind verse
by verse, granted curse by
curse can't see the `faith of
light` I need this love potion of
last cry to numb the pain in my
life.

Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2007 (03:32 AM)

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Date: 01/31/08 (09:56 AM)

Author: JustWords

Poem Title: Remarks with a smirk

COMMENTS (28)

ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...

05/11/09 (11:59 AM)

def. short but i enjoyed both part 1 and 2. i was able to define for myslef what love can and actually is..great work...10!

big josh

01/20/09 (11:32 PM)

wow simply amazing shorty dat was hot

W@y To Cocky ,...

09/21/08 (03:03 PM)

nice deeper than a lot of peolpe poem

Loco T

07/25/08 (09:39 PM)

again short and simple but im diggin it keep it up 10**

HomoishHomo

01/29/08 (06:23 PM)

ayy ma i dig this poem..its soo simple but it has soo much meaning to it..i like the part "I'll kill you with my verbs scream to myself I don't deserve for my will the day I lie" ...good part mos def :D

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