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"love SICK"
  by Mona Lisa


Sneezing and coughing came from the bed room

I seen my babe laying in the bed I said whats wrong he said he felt like a mummy locked up in it's tomb

I could tell he had a head that was achin

knees that was shakin

and i knew that the good cells were overtaken

the germs invaded

the body was betrayed

his head was burning hot

noise was runny, it was dripping snot

I said I'll make you some soup I won't microwave it but I'll cook it in the pot

you want chicken noodle soup

I'll catch the chicken right from the coop

I took out my thermometer and took his temperature

Oh babe your really sick

I could call the doctor or I could be your nurse take you pick

I rubbed vicks on his back

I could tell he liked that

he started to sweat

I cooled him of with a rag

I told him not to get his boys worked up just let them sag

I put the garbage by the bed just in case he had to gag

before I left the room I asked him is there any thing else I can give my babe

he said I want you

I looked at him and said maybe next time babe I aint trying to get the flew


Get Better Go0B3r :)
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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2008 (04:48 PM)
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  Iaintgot1
11/18/08 (12:56 AM) 
Girl this right here was tight. I really enjoyed reading it. It captured me from the first sentence and I kept reading. 10 stars.

  KiNg-Go0B3r
10/15/08 (07:01 PM) 
haha but i want u right nowww...naww im too tired haha it wont be guud for niether of us=]

  B. Rose
10/15/08 (06:20 PM) 
Wow.... silly shit... lol

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