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"Love Sick Satisfaction"
  by JayLegit


It's 1 in the morning and the sun's still shinin'
And it's not so surprising cuz forever are diamonds
The glisten off your skin and the gloss on your lips
Just melting me away as my heart starts to drip

Ecstasy in action definition of attraction
Envision split decisions in the stride of satisfaction
I'm quite satisfied being love sick in madness
I caught a case of it and I hope I relapse it
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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2007 (04:15 PM)
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  Jenesis
08/01/08 (02:37 PM) 
ahh...this is a very soothing and relaxing piece...i can grip the sensuality and the love that comes along with it...nicely written =)

  divinesoulrebe...
04/17/08 (12:06 AM) 
"i caught a case of it and i hope i relapse it" damn that was a hot ass line!!! loved the flow and the methaphors.

  candylickerlov...
11/15/07 (07:45 PM) 
WOW DIS IS NICE AS HELL!!! YOU PULLIN ALL DA FEMALES WIT THEM WORDS RIGHT THERE.. LOL!! GUD ONE!!!

  HiS Cr4zY Be4u...
09/27/07 (02:00 AM) 
I luv it when someone can write something so short...but it has so much impact and meaning behind it. you seem to have this skill. Keep doin u....

  Vy
09/25/07 (02:59 AM) 
Not many words, but you just made love to my mind.....nice

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