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"love snuck"
A Chainz. and ash_g Collaboration


  ash_g:

up on me love snuck,
it hurt so bad it left like i was
hit with a big truck.
it snuck up on me and
now i'm love struck.
love struck but tellin him
that i don't give a fuck.
love hurts,
i'm tired of being burnt.
it's not all worth my heart
and feelings being hurt.
love snuck up,
but it didn't make me weak.
playin the hard role,
not showin I care.
actin as if love never showed up,
and like i don't care.

  Chainz.:

sure love hurts, once in a while
but when you down, your loved one can make you smile..
to have someone by your side,
to actually someone who doesn't care about your pride..
in both worlds its all about love,
but to not have love, is like getting struck by the top above..
n if you don't have some kinda faith,
at one point a another u wont have nothing to live for now whats left to face..
whats left to take.. heart brake comes n goes.
but the perfect girl or guy stays n that's what i know..
u can try to prove me wrong,
but love has its wrongs n rights, the good the bad
n when u miss someone you could be very sad,
but when they come back its like there's no such thing as bad
n that's a fact.. prove me wrong..but for now ima leave it like that
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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2009 (10:06 PM)
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  big josh
09/05/09 (10:32 PM) 
hot drop you two. nice

  A.C.H.
07/09/09 (05:45 PM) 
I am feeling this write. Love definitely hurts when you are in love and the one you love does not love you back. In order to prevent this from happenning we need to be more selective concerning who we fall in love with. Much luv you two on this write! - "the inspired one"

  williesidney
07/09/09 (05:40 PM) 
Wow Love Snuck and you are so right love will sneak up on us so fast some times we don't know what happen great write just always use that gift you have nice ten stars.

  Moey
07/09/09 (02:45 AM) 
very very true. love hurts but love can also feel good as well. great points of view. nice collab

  reggie000
07/09/09 (02:18 AM) 
soooo true.

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