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"Love Speechless"
  by DOMINICANPOET


Ambushed by feelings
As my heart has combusted
Now i am not whole

Pieces lie there...stuck
Stuck to the ground where they fell
Pieces of my heart

Fragments of my mind
No longer work nor excel
Im without you now...

Left alone...Love failed...
It no longer favors me...
It chose someone else...

Poetry is Love..
Well in my eyes it may be..
Well it just started...

Tired of people
Who continue to hurt me...
So i give up now....

I wont look for love...
I'll let it come to me now...
It's too heart wrenching

I know it's my fault
For trusting people easy
Now I sit hurting....

***Love ....tisk....tisk.... I have no comment on the word LOVE no more...****
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Date Submitted: Sep 01, 2008 (09:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 09/02/08 (09:30 AM)
Author: Ordained Misfit
Poem Title: I am LOVE

Date: 09/01/08 (10:25 PM)
Author: D.O.X.
Poem Title: Authentic Love

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  leezymleezy
09/03/08 (05:23 PM) 
ok....I see u went all out on this haiku...longer than I expected but Im lovin the 7th stanza....:)

  Speechless Ima...
09/02/08 (08:45 PM) 
felt this piece. i can relate.

  MzSpoon is bac...
09/02/08 (06:48 PM) 
Awh triplet, this touched me more than you know. I haven't given up on love, no matter how men trip! Keep your head up sweetie.

  African Queen
09/02/08 (09:46 AM) 
love hurts but we take the risk all the time hoping that it will be different each time...and im sure your feeling will change sometime cause i have this mentality now. so never give up even though it may seem like a worthless road to go to....

  Ordained Misfi...
09/02/08 (09:22 AM) 
With love, we take the risk of being hurt... and when true love abounds, it's worth the leap of faith. When you find the ultimate love, it will heal every wound caused in the past... trust

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