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"Love unlocked"
  by A.Renee


u not lovin me
like im lovin u
so i let it go
and countiune what i do
no more heart breaks
no more head aches
cus of u
cus of u

i packed my bags
now i'm going home
been in the heart break hotel
im going back to the danger zone
all alone, all alone
i dont know what to do
but to cry at home
now i know what i said, but u dont care
but u killin me, u killin me

i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, away from me

u not lovin me
like u suppose to be
u go far away when i say
come closer please
u know i gotta leave
cus u not lovin me entirely
u know i gotta go u know i gotta move
away from u, way away from u

y not lovin me
like im lovin u
i think about u
everyday in school
all my friends dont get it
wit my fam is no different
y i put up wit u and ur ways
but all the sad days wit u fina blow away

cus ima keep that

i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, that love unlocked
i'll keep that love unlocked, away from me

Love Lockdown - Kanye West
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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (03:07 PM)
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  Diemenz
12/14/08 (05:19 PM) 
tho im totally sick of that kanye song i was intreged by the piece good flip on it

  Sie7e
12/06/08 (10:54 PM) 
another xcellent alternatve to a song. i like it, and its very relatable.

  ~Unconcious Mi...
11/11/08 (03:55 PM) 
thats whats up i like how every line just flows together....should do a soul cast with this...10s

  mp
11/10/08 (06:12 PM) 
i bet if i heard ur version wit ur voice it would b betta den kanye 10 stars

  big josh
11/10/08 (04:39 PM) 
yo this was really heart warming I hope you find the love that you rlooking for and make sure its the one you need but other than that this was a greta piece I will give it a ten

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