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"Love, unrequited"
  by Queenmysha


Whatever it is I've never experienced before.
You caught me totally off guard.
Your smile, your scent, your embrace, your game.
I can see myself moanin' your name.
Did we cross a line that we shouldn't have crossed? Was mine the only mind that was totally tossed?
A month ago we were homies.
Now, you've stopped calling and I'm thinkin' it's something i've done.

You touched my body the way others have tried, but you were the one I let inside.
I'm thinkin' about your warm embrace and it has me missin' your face.
You had me thinkin' you wanted me yo', now I'm facing a closed door.
I think about your lips and your eyes, and your touch I yearn, you stoked a fire inside me that still burns.
It will consume me if I don't walk away, but I look back hoping you'll ask me to stay. I would lie here in your arms forever, but we're just friends right?
So that'll happen never.
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2007 (06:22 PM)
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  Erika Kane
08/17/07 (03:34 PM) 
Very good. You really let your emotions flow with this.

  Syndel
08/17/07 (05:37 AM) 
damn now that was a hit sometimes it happens very nice write filled with passion and agony for what you had and may still want very well done

  B. Rose
08/16/07 (07:20 PM) 
WELL...DAMN... IF THAT WHAT YOU WANT YO FRIEND TO DO...ILL BE YO FREIND...LOL... NAW IM PLAYIN I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEELS MA... I CKAN MOST DEF RELATE... A FAV

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