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"LOVE WINE"
  by O.J-AKA-BIG CHIEF


As soon as I laid my eyes upon her
Cupid shot me with a 12 gauge
And blasted open my rib cage

And ripped my heart out my socket
And put it in her pocket
And told her to keep it
Love it
Cherish it

Forever
Forever ever
Forever ever

Forever for eternity

Until death divorce our unity

Her ora gave our souls strong magnetic chemistry

Feeling the vibe of electricity

I think she put a spell on me


Or is it because I fell in love with her
Everysince me and her been together
I've been a fool for her

Everyday it feels like my head is a race track
because she always running thruogh my mind

Like God cut half of my head open and put her inside
Like I'm Frankienstien

And took a needle and thread and sowed me up shut
I would give up my life just to be in hers I love her that much

And everytime we're together
Our love increase to a higher level
Like I'm a different person
she can make an angel out of the devil

And I'm the blessest man in the world
to recieve the love that she gives
Inhaling her essence is the reason why I live

The way she love physically
Is the same way she loves mentally
So excellently

They are so many words
to describe what she do to me
That you can't even fit all the words
in the dictionary

Our love is more unique than ordinary
Making love to us is like karma sutra
than the regular missionary
She's like my personal secretary

Because she gives me what I need and more
To prove her love I would take a rocket into space and soar
Through the galaxy in a quest to find the brightest star

Just to form it into a ring and put it on her ring finger
So she can always remember
The representation of my true love
wraped around her finger

And if Adam gave Eve a part of his rib then my girl gave me her spine
Because she's my foundation
my pillar
The structure of my heart and mind

And I'll forever be drunk off her love wine






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Date Submitted: May 07, 2008 (07:25 PM)
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  rhymeslikedime...
10/06/08 (06:32 PM) 
wow. omg. this is beautiful.

  MiltownJosh
05/29/08 (10:47 PM) 
VERY VERSATILE, VERY EFFECTIVE, I CANT TELL U HOW MUCH IM FEELIN THE WORDPLAY- 10 STARS BIG HOMIE

  unforgivenange...
05/16/08 (08:14 AM) 
I love this so sweet and emotional. Great job professing your love!!! I love the flow and feeling great job :)

  Sandy Vaccaro ...
05/11/08 (10:52 AM) 
This is so Beautiful & deeply moving! Love the sweet, romantic sentiments!! You painted your emotions with such vivid imagery!..nicely done Mr.-10starz.

  Amazing E.D.W
05/11/08 (12:25 AM) 
You went in on this one. I like the way you easily staggerd through this drunk on that Love Wine I hope the muse for this can appreciate these heartfelt words

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