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"LOVE'S BLIND SIGHT"
  by Eryn


AZ U FALL DEEPER UR LETN YO WALL DOWN
AND IT'Z LIKE THA PERSON U IN LOVE WIT IZ UR ENEMY,
BUT THEY'RE NOT.
THAT WALL U SPENT SO MUCH TIME PUTN UP IZ SLOWLY STARTN 2 COME DOWN
CUZ U FEEL COMFORTABLE...
THEY GOT U TO THAT POINT WHERE THEY OPENED THAT DOOR...
THA KEY IZ TO NOT GET TOO COMFORTABLE TO WHERE U BLINDIN YO SELF OF WHATZ REAL
AND WHAT'Z STANDIN IN FRONT OF U...
WHICH IS A LIE!
"EVOL" (EE-VALL) IZ LOVE BACKWARDS AND WHEN LOVE TURNS INTO LIES "EVOL" IS THA RESULTS OF IT. U BECOME BLINDED BY WHAT'Z TRUE AND COMMON SENSE BECOMES A THING IN THA PAST....
THAT WALL U BUILT DOESN'T EXIST ANYMORE...
THAT GUARD U HAD IZ ON A PERMANENT LUNCH BREAK
AND YO HEART IS FAIR GAME!
U LET THAT CHARM OF THEIR'Z GET THA BEST OF U
AND NOW WHEN U FINALLY PUT UR REALITY GLASSES BACK ON
THA DAMAGE HAS ALREADY BEGAN TO SETTLE IN...
LIKE ACID IT'Z BURNIN A HOLE IN UR HEART...
BACK TO SQUARE 1...
BACK TO RE-BUILDING THAT WALL...
GOTTA HIRE A NEW GUARD....
GOTTA TORTURE THE NEXT LOVER THAT TRIES TO MEND UR BROKEN HEART ................
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Date Submitted: Mar 07, 2008 (12:19 AM)
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  Quite
08/20/08 (02:39 AM) 
this was a magical piece ma

  stlpimpin27
03/19/08 (07:55 PM) 
I LIKE THIS 1 JUST AS MUCH AS YOUR OTHERS BUT DON'T TORTURE ME, OK???

  Speechless Ima...
03/07/08 (02:33 AM) 
i feel u on this...things are crazy when it comes to love...you try to make things better but its hard...nice write

  Blackdymend
03/07/08 (01:14 AM) 
girl this was so tru...i've gotten comfortable n had to rebuild da damn wall 2 many damn times..its pointless realli.but this was a good write..i enjoyed readin it

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