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"Love's Eclipse"
  by PoisonPoetry


This is in the form of a song, but it is still poetic. This will be my first one ever written..it may not be the best, but it was worth a try..

Written 1/6/2009

Verse 1:
The silence bounces off your lips like an echo in the dark
Staring silently, I long to touch your soft lips
But knowing that you only haunt me in my dreams
Wishing and praying that you will return to me once more
Because this love was never lost in the hands of time
As the world spins by me faster in a wild blur of color
I cry my lonely tears in the loneliness of my room…

Chorus:
Why does pain unseen hurt so much?
Why do my tears linger in my face?
Can someone save me from this heartache of life?
Erase the wrongs and shield the pain from my soul…
(repeat 2x)

Verse 2:
You used to hold me close and whisper everything will be alright
The connection once felt faded away in the creases of darkness
My once smile fades slowly, leaving nothing but blurry eyes
Scars from the pain you caused my haunt my body
Trying to hide from the world the emotion rollarcoaster we ride
I let myself be fooled by your lies, telling me you would always be here for me…
So angry at myself, staring at the empty pill bottle on the bathroom floor…

Chorus:
Why does pain unseen hurt so much?
Why do my tears linger in my face?
Can someone save me from this heartache of life?
Erase the wrongs and shield the pain from my soul…
(repeat 2x)

Verse 3:
These tears stream down so heavily
My hands shake ever so steadily
My lips quiver reminiscing of your kiss
Your eyes so beautiful I do miss
Soft hands holding me close
Kissing my heart feeling my love overdose
My everlasting love was never enough
Holding myself up after you left is too tough
Baby just come too me once more
Instead of just shutting me out of loves door…

Chorus:
Why does pain unseen hurt so much?
Why do my tears linger in my face?
Can someone save me from this heartache of life?
Erase the wrongs and shield the pain from my soul…
(repeat 2x)
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Date Submitted: Jan 09, 2009 (01:06 AM)
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  ohmi
08/02/09 (12:08 PM) 
Nice theme for a song, nice idea that love is only 'eclipsed' and the sun comes out because being loving is our lifeblood , but why does it never reach the point where the pain goes away because one realises that life is about loving everyone, not about dwelling in pains from past mistakes, not about hiding one's love because it can bring pain, but giving it ever more freely so that it becomes pure love and frees other to love without condition too, so love comes back to one freely too in the e...
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  monica
07/25/09 (11:42 PM) 
this was very good to be your first poem that you wrote i love it very creative

  touchdapearl2
06/19/09 (02:52 AM) 
You are so talented and your profile picture is one of art! this was a beautiful song!

  PoeticStarChil...
05/27/09 (08:26 PM) 
the silence bounces off your lips like an echo in the dark! that is a hot line. This piece is very powerful. I could feel the emotion in it.

  niKKi fetZ
04/13/09 (01:54 AM) 
yes VERY impressive this is amazingly good keep writing :)

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