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"love's got u trippin...watch the words that come from between your teeth ;)"
  by Shy Gyrl
  - This Poem is a response to the poem final words by slym_jimm


I look at him who i have all the love for.
But my arms are sore,
and right now my feet has no desire to touch cold floors.
i look into his eyes
as a mischievious look builds up in mine.
kiss his chest,
like i did so many times.
he rolls me over and whispers one more time,
"Baby im hungry...u aint gonna fix me nothin to eat?"
I place both hands on his head as i pout my lips.
"Boo hoo sweetie...IHOP's down the street."
His face falls,
and my baby sucks his teeth.
he bites and kisses both my nipples and says,
"woman i cant believe you...u just mean"
I direct his head further down,
and open my legs.
"Breakfast is served...
all natural and sweet.
So get down there, do u and eat.
And if u dont wanna eat...
like i said there's an IHOP down the street."



**a ha ha ha ha ha...Slym what now? what? lol...Shy shimmy away from the page singing..."do a lil dance..make a lil love get down tonight"**
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Date Submitted: Sep 16, 2008 (12:46 PM)
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  ~*~QU33N~MA3~*...
12/12/08 (01:25 AM) 
FUCKS NO!! LOL A MESS CHICA YOU ARE SILLY AS HELL BRO LMAO... GOTSTA LOVE THAT SHY GIRL ROFL!!! RETARDED AS HELL

  C. Renegade
12/08/08 (12:20 AM) 
thishere what im talkin bout i got a poem call breakfast in bed similar lol but wouldnt have 2 go down the street when u got perfect meal right there in the bed lol nice write ten stars... Ren

  WISDOM21
11/22/08 (01:49 AM) 
LOL..THIS IS SUM FUNNY SHIT... DAMN!! HAHAHA

  blaque
11/02/08 (05:27 AM) 
lmao...that was too funny...loved the endign...lmao, the song was too much, too funny...10

  AR-15
10/23/08 (01:35 AM) 
there definitely was some humor in this write.. I needed a good laugh nicely written piece here..

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