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"loves hurt"
  by jamillz011


LIKE BEIN HURT N YUR HEART
IS LIKE A VITAL ORGAN BEEN TOOK
OUT YU BUT LIKE DEN DA NEXT THING YU
REALISE IS DO YU WANT 2 FALL IN
LOVE AGAIN ND DO YU STILL WANT
THAT PERSON BUT LOVE IS LIKE YUR
WORST ENEMY YU FEEL ME ON DIS
BUT ITS HARD 2 TRUST TRY 2 LUST
ND SEE DA SAME PERSON IN YUR EYES
SO WY WOULD GOD CREATE A LOVE ND
KNO IT WOULD HURT
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Date Submitted: Nov 13, 2008 (03:19 PM)
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  LaLa14
11/15/08 (10:19 AM) 
shit im likin this fa real...i feel you on this tip...i wondered bout this same shit a few years back before i started writin an it does get to you after a while but like i always say keep ya head up aiight mayne you kno things work same as me...lifes on a messed up tip that way stay up aiight much luv an respect one

  TUANE
11/14/08 (08:35 PM) 
See, thats the ups and downs of love. Ppl think that Love is all fun and games, all lovey dubby and shit, but love also comes with pain. I talk abouta ll that in my write "Love is" But when you mistake Lust for love, you will really get hurt if ur not careful. Keep tha pen moving bruh. 9starz

  A'trocity
11/14/08 (06:51 PM) 
I feel you, but this is prolly how it is; better to go through and become strong, than to have never went through and be weak. not sayin we're weak but u kno wat i mean. n it hurts now, but in da end, you're a Souljah. keep writin souljah, i feel this

  SiSithaflii3st
11/14/08 (04:31 PM) 
because it'll make you stronger for the real thing that's why we go through so many test. Its just for the final real thing... good write

  Lyric904Lyfe
11/13/08 (04:34 PM) 
From my perspective, god like wants u to test the waters yah know until you find that true love because even when u think its true love, that other person may think different

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