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"LOVE'S TRIANGLE"
  by Bree Bree


I've never been in this position
hard to decide this desicion
redirecting love's ambition
because one completes this mission....

But two accept submission
giving into what I mention...
causing unintentioned tension
cuz giving ONE permission

will leave ONE with retention

and leave me without ONE...

hard to know which one's the one...
So what's wrong with having fun?

Both declare there's love for me
So for both I do declare..
They do say love's a two way street (LOL)
Though I know it isn't fair...

My heart is torn in both directions
Cuz i crave each one's effection
looking far beyond erections...
...this is more than just attention.

IN LOVE with one
but LOVE another
...wish it wasn't undercover.
...(BUT)....
wouldn't have it any other way
Cuz if confronted i would (st-st-)studder

Can't seem to figure it out
--Looking at every angle...
so i guess i'll just continue
to connect this loves triangle.
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Date Submitted: Jan 02, 2008 (06:22 PM)
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  rsenio
01/08/08 (08:41 PM) 
I couldn't agree more wit the decision you decided, cuz sometimes a triangle does seem a lil one sided.

  .Always.Catali...
01/05/08 (05:20 PM) 
have I not on more than one occasion asked you to stay out of my damn head?...lol...but for real, I am there too and then some...

  piss a mofo of...
01/04/08 (08:32 PM) 
what a triangle, someone always gets hurt but more often then not its all parties involved in some form...very impressive scribe..you put it down on a hot topic in a great way, this is def Excellence in Ink!!

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
01/03/08 (07:05 PM) 
quite frankly the hardest decision to ever make. to choose one that holds your heart or one that fills it. been on both sides of this. neither side any the easier (sigh) someone's got to get hurt. one or the other...maybe even you when they decide the game's over. very deep write on a topic so many can relate to.

  STYLES C.
01/02/08 (09:07 PM) 
decisions...decisions...But taking away the right to chose? hmmm...that's touchy...the longer it goes on the deeper they fall ...the harder it will be..

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