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"Loving Someone Who Doesn't Love You."
  by Lov3M3L3@v3M3@lon3


Everyday i see you.
You see me too.
Words the we used to speak seem to have no meaning.
Feelings were forgotten.
Washed away like sand on a shore.
Love lost it's riches and became poor.
You moved on and i stayed stuck in place.
Wishing that i could erase what has just taken place.
A place where i do nothing but make mistakes.
Falling and drowning at a fast pace.
But im in my favorite place.
A place where im disregarding my well-being.
Just to insure yours.
The sure cause is you but im wondering if you could be the cure too.
I'm lost and confuse.
Better describe as battered and bruised.
My conclusion is that maybe i was being used or maybe i was just being a fool.
Not one to easily cry.
You made my tears hit the ground like a raging animal.
My heart is tanigble.
I soon come to learn that feelings that live and breed in the past do not die in the future.
Because even though all we been through, as much as you made me cry and those nights you made me feel like i wanted to die.
Shooting "my love" leaving bullets lodge inside.
I still could not say good-bye.
Seeing me down right now im sure would make you proud.
Seeing me right now with a broken heart i know would make you smile.
But this is a lesson that we must go through.
Title of this lesson is
" It's hard loving someone who doesn't love you"

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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2007 (09:17 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 07/19/08 (03:05 PM)
Author: mscookie2u
Poem Title: LETTING GO

Date: 11/16/07 (09:36 PM)
Author: King Of Heaterz
Poem Title: Don't Give Up Hope.....

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comment icon  COMMENTS (27)
  Karma
11/08/08 (08:00 PM) 
This scribe reminds me of something that i wrote..and i mean this is somethin crazy and hard to go thru but real talk this was a really nice scribe it came off so nice...well done.. ---KarmazKandiKissez----

  Tika2010
10/03/08 (11:39 PM) 
I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU ARE COMMING FROM I KINDA FEEL THE SAME WAY

  ButterflyDream
10/03/08 (11:11 PM) 
An excellent write in the sense...the truth.Im feeling this and can def relate.

  DOMINICANPOET
06/08/08 (07:30 PM) 
feelin this ten from me no doubt

  KINGLO
06/08/08 (06:57 PM) 
this is hot

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