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"Loving you... Lazily"
  by Beautiful Soul


Lovin You - Minnie Riperton




Loving me
For you is a natural endeavor
Effortlessly taking me aback by your eroticism
Passionately and without criticism

With infatuated eagerness
Accepting my meager offerings
Deeply you have repeatedly
Stroked the term desire
In the heart of my sensuality

Contradicting a plea with locked eyes
Eros…
Has embodied your soul
Creating a threesome of intimacy
Indefinitely
Pleasure is reciprocated

Lazily

Less clues of your requisite
The kisses have become hollow
With each climaxed breath
Discharged dissatisfaction… must be swallowed

Freedom from a peck of happiness
The saddened cruelty of what I lack
I stare sadly
At the writings written immensely upon your back
Sketching the structure of pain
Ego induced stains

I apologize

For I have yet to learn the art of
Love…making
But taking… back the innocence of what love means

Within the root of where I receive freely
stolen… momentarily
Screams of pleasure muted viciously
I have not much to recompense
Supplying the morsels inside me I have left

Painfully… guilty … lazily
I can’t fully provide
sex

Hold me
Clutch me
Embrace me
Teach me
…continuously…

It’s with each tender attention of your touch
That I want nothing more but to love you
Generously and as much

Until then
Loving you lazily with all that I have to give
And immeasurably loving you
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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2008 (02:50 AM)
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  LiquidFire
10/01/08 (02:29 PM) 
Did I comment on this already? Seems so, but whatever lol. This makes me sit back n reflect on some encounters, even now, and its not lack of skill that I'm lazy, just mere satisfaction has me tired and selfish. Lol. But he knows this, and that I got him later, after I've had my nap. Lmao

  Blaqmermaid
09/28/08 (11:03 AM) 
Tranquility personified. Reading this was like walking in the park with the love of my life. The 5th stanza was my absolute favorite. "Freedom from a peck of happiness", Sketching the structure of pain", "Ego induced stains." Outstanding images that allowed me to truly connect with this piece.

  Magic101
09/28/08 (09:19 AM) 
beautifully written. i enjoyed reading this piece. it flow so well with the classic song. stay hot! 10 starz

  XPERIENCE
09/21/08 (03:04 PM) 
i agree this made me all warm inside lol i love reading things like that..ahhh love.... so beautiful... " Within the root of where I receive freely stolen… momentarily Screams of pleasure muted viciously I have not much to recompense Supplying the morsels inside me I have left Painfully… guilty … lazily I can’t fully provide sex " lol ahhh dont i know it!

  mindigoblue
09/19/08 (11:12 PM) 
This is warm and wonderful. I smiled throughout. This was wonderfully soft and gentle almost innocent in it's approach to the desire to express the love felt. Really beautiful

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