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"Loving You Wit a Cloudy Mind"
  by InFamouZ1
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Questioned by Tru


Ok so the misjudging happened
and you want to bring it to and end
Stop your love train in its tracks
With no turn backs
Look down on upon my heart
See your thoughts of not caring
is tearing me apart
Suspicion it was
But a vision I had
You baby would never,
The thought shouldn't have came past
I told you we are equal
I didn't give it to you that night
So if you please, im down on a bended knee
add us together 1+1=
2 we are equal you and me
Yes I was wrong, but don't "kill me"
I was only loving you with a clouded mind
"someone" nagging me
So slow down
Decrease the heat
Be a little more understanding
And combine our hearts and see what it brings
I apologize 1 2 3 times for you baby
That nite a dark cloud
Came and entered my mind
And with that dark cloud came the nagging
When the storm passed
hours later I tried to clear the drama
But the storm came heavy
I apologize for loving you on a clouded mind

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Date Submitted: Nov 30, 2007 (06:21 PM)
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  eeyore
12/06/07 (07:05 PM) 
i liked it....

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